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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
people
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 have many accesses to advanced
technology
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 which can be used for
communication
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 and information transport, so that they can
work
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 in any location. In my view, the advantages definitely outweigh the disadvantages of
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 phenomenon.
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 of all, the most significant advantage of communicating
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 is the efficiency of transferring information. Thanks to many applications
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 as Wechat, Face Time and Skype, we can exchange ideas and interact with working partners and families quickly, along with saving much time and avoid wasting our energy to commute to another place. Here is an example, we often make a contract on the Internet with advanced companies, because those companies have cutting-edge
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 techniques to ensure the safety of making contracts,
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 saving the cost and time of each other, making the process of cooperation more efficiently.
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, because of the COVID-19 pandemic, many
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 have to
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 at home, due to the lock-down regulation. In
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technology
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 plays an extremely vital part in
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's lives.
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,
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 can easily
work
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 at home and have face-to-face interaction with a business partner and colleague through a computer and mobile phone; students who can not back to school could have the access to lessons with their teachers and classmates. Meanwhile,
people
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also
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 avoid the risk of infection and stay safe without unemployment. To conclude,
communication
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technology
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 solves many problems and
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 up our living standards in many ways, along with making our
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 process more efficiently, providing convenience to our lives.
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