some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

In our modern , society some people believe that infant can make their own

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and make a heart for themselves;

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, others have

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attitude which contains, making a decision by a toddler can bring them selfishness. I believe both of these views can be acceptable, despite the fact that young generations can have a private growth with their own decisions.

Firstly

, people do not like to give permission to their adolescents

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regular basis because they think it can be harmful to them.

For instance

, if they had their own choices, they would not be in communication with their friends easily. In

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term, young people just think about themselves,

however

, their friends have some expectations namely working together, and asking for their help to buy suitable clothes;

moreover

, fathers want to invade their privacy and interpret their

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because they

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that it can be helpful for their future activity.

In contrast

, some mothers think that it can be better to give them a space for everyday matters,

furthermore

, their offspring can be affected by the society in which they are living.

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, if they purchase

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food based on their interests, they can make important decisions including a university subject.

On the other hand

, making good decisions can help them to improve their confidence in the future.

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a result , when they work for a company, they can reach a high level of position because of self-confidence. In my opinion, we should give

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a chance to pick up their heart,

however

, kid mothers can support them, and give them advice if it is necessary. My mother always supports me in every decision;

whereas

, some of them are wrong.

To sum up

, there are many debates around

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issue

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some of them agree and

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others completely disagree.