You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: • explain the situation • tell him/her how you are affected by this • suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to request you to resolve

this

issue that my neighbour have been doing inappropriate behaviour that they were made a lot of noise to other neighbour included me. I am living

to their room. Every night I just noticed that they always made a lot of noise and It’s sound like they were having a party. I just want to let you know that in my room it is not just only me in my room that my brother

also

stays with me. We could not sleep lately

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therefor

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the noise was so

loudly

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situation is not

consideratness

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considerateness

considerations

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letter is a request letter. If you can solve

this

problem that will be grateful. I Definably quite not want to have a big issue with the neighbour but I have reminded them too many times. I want you to talk with them seriously. I cannot accept

this

problem anymore. we are living in the same area should be nice and make a good relationship. Yours sincerely, Pair

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

177 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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