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In the past,teachers were the main source of information,but today students have a wide source of information， so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people hold the opinion that
teachers
 are no more essential in modern education for
students
 can obtain
information
 through much wider sources. From my perspective, I disagree with
this
 point of view, and I believe
teachers
 still play an important role in the educational progress of
students
. There are a number of reasons why I assert the importance of
teachers
. Predominantly, at school, only
teachers
 can guide
students
 face to face in real-time, providing a more systematic and efficient education.
Teachers
 know how to teach
students
 in terms of their weaknesses, and
thus
students
 can gain a more comprehensive knowledge system.
Besides
, the professionalism of certified
teachers
 is more reliable.
For instance
, these
teachers
 are much more familiar and experienced with the problems
students
 usually face.
As a result
,
students
 could get correct and standard answers from their
teachers
, less time and energy-consuming than searching on the internet. Undeniably,
information
 on the internet takes certain advantages over that from
teachers
.
For example
, it covers a wider range of knowledge of
teachers
, and
students
 can freely choose what they want to learn.
However
,
information
 on the internet is a mixed bag. Not only professionals in specific areas but
also
 the general public can publish comments and articles on knowledge websites and platforms, and
therefore
,
students
 could be misled by the fallacious
information
, forming a wrong understanding, thereby, which might cause adverse effects to
students
 in the long run. In conclusion, while I realize that wider access to
information
 could benefit
students
, I do believe that the role and status of
teachers
 can not be replaced in modern education.
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