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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

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Always there are
people
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 who feel humanity and satisfaction by helping the poor as well as unemployed individuals and unable
people
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. There is a yet-to-be-answered question in
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 regard: Is
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 true, which nowadays
people
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 are more willing to help charity institutions and the poor than past? As it relates to me, I firmly believe that
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 are more volunteer to help unable individuals in comparison with a previous. There are two main reasons clarifying my point of view, which are described as follows.
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,
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 know are more aware and socialized than past. Thanks to the technologies
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 as the Internet
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 are more aware of their environment and the weakness of poor
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.
People
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 and especially the young generation spend a great deal of time on social media. In
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 social media, the young generation and totally all
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, follow some role models, who share some information about the poor and terrible condition of nourishment and lack of necessary infrastructures.
People
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 by watching these clips, feel a sense of responsibility to help poor
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.
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, the improvement of the technologies and the Internet are some crucial factors in the enhancement of
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 awareness.
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,
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’s life is more dependent on together and
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 dependence may result in more enthusiasm to help.
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 have more connections together due to their communication not only at work but
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 everywhere. I mean, the Covide-19 pandemic was a terrible reminder in all
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 and I am not except. Many
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 got sick due to the emission speed of
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 pandemic.
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,
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 tried to be beside together and remained at home even if they had some important works to do. That feeling resulted in the enhancement of financial and emotional support between
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.
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, previous
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 had a less dependent on the others due to the low improvement of city life. I mean a majority of
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 had lived in the rural areas which the main works were based on traditional agriculture. Indeed,
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 are more dependent on their relatives and family than other individuals. To conclude, I assert nowadays
people
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 are more willing to help poor
people
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. In my point of view in comparison with past, not only do
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 have more awareness but
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 they are more dependent together.
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