Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

Always there are
people
who feel humanity and satisfaction by helping the poor as well as unemployed individuals and unable
people
. There is a yet-to-be-answered question in
this
regard: Is
this
true, which nowadays
people
are more willing to help charity institutions and the poor than past? As it relates to me, I firmly believe that
people
are more volunteer to help unable individuals in comparison with a previous. There are two main reasons clarifying my point of view, which are described as follows.
First
,
people
know are more aware and socialized than past. Thanks to the technologies
such
as the Internet
people
are more aware of their environment and the weakness of poor
people
.
People
and especially the young generation spend a great deal of time on social media. In
this
social media, the young generation and totally all
people
, follow some role models, who share some information about the poor and terrible condition of nourishment and lack of necessary infrastructures.
People
by watching these clips, feel a sense of responsibility to help poor
people
.
Therefore
, the improvement of the technologies and the Internet are some crucial factors in the enhancement of
people
awareness.
Second
,
people
’s life is more dependent on together and
this
dependence may result in more enthusiasm to help.
People
have more connections together due to their communication not only at work but
also
everywhere. I mean, the Covide-19 pandemic was a terrible reminder in all
people
and I am not except. Many
people
got sick due to the emission speed of
this
pandemic.
Therefore
,
people
tried to be beside together and remained at home even if they had some important works to do. That feeling resulted in the enhancement of financial and emotional support between
people
.
On the other hand
, previous
people
had a less dependent on the others due to the low improvement of city life. I mean a majority of
people
had lived in the rural areas which the main works were based on traditional agriculture. Indeed,
People
are more dependent on their relatives and family than other individuals. To conclude, I assert nowadays
people
are more willing to help poor
people
. In my point of view in comparison with past, not only do
people
have more awareness but
also
they are more dependent together.
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