Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Hi Aseem, I am writing

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letter to let you know about the new house I bought. I always wanted to have my own house and

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its

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my dream come true. I bought

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new flat in Jhumera. It is three

bedroom

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, hall kitchen with two balconies and a separate laundry room. The best part is that

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got

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within my budget and that too see view facing. The neighbourhood is fully residential and far from the downtown so it is

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quiet place to live. The security is 24/7 and very convenient for groceries as shops are close to the building.

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winter you can specially visit my house because you love the beach and you will get that hotel stay feeling.

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, we made one room as a guest room so you can use that when you will be here. Can't wait to see you. Take care. Bye. Love,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Submitted by brijal_desai on Tue Nov 09 2021

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. (# typing) What are the reasons for this? Is the decline in writing by hand a positive or negative development?

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle which never ends up.

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