5. A young person is going to spend his first day at the office next month. Write a letter to explain what he should do on his first day. In your letter, you should tell: – what work should be done in the company – what he/she will do on the first day of work – what items/objects he /she needs to take along.

Dear John, I'm Janet, your direct manager. I am pleased to welcome you to join my team
next
month, so I would like to inform some information before you start working.
First
of all, since ABC company is the leading technology consultant in Thailand, so
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learning
some technical terms is your top priority in the
first
month. It would help you to communicate effectively with other teams. Another task that you should do is gathering requirements from clients and developing business requirements for trading
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which I will explain
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detail on your
first
day. Anyway, the
first
day of work will be a lot of funs. In the morning, Miss Pathai from
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team will present
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our company's vision and mission. After that, I will show you where your desk is and talk to you about products under my team.
Lastly
, please do not forget to bring a lunch-box, since the canteen has been closed for two months. It will take half an hour to buy some
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at the nearest restaurant.
Thus
, I recommend you pack it by yourself. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Best regards, Jenny
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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