The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent to do agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being healthy is the
formost
happiness and Correct your spelling
foremost
most
every one
wants healthy life. Replace the word
everyone
Although
, it is sometimes thought the healthy life would be lower in the future as compared to past. In my opinion, I considered that Linking Words
people
are affected by many factors which are not good for Use synonyms
health
.
There are several reasons why Use synonyms
people
's Use synonyms
health
is decreasing. The Use synonyms
first
and foremost important thing is that consuming fast food. Fast food is not good for Linking Words
health
because it has too much oil. Use synonyms
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the UK, both women and men are working and they do not have time for cooking, they prefer junk food every day. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
people
have Use synonyms
also
cold drinks Linking Words
such
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coca cola
, sprite, Add a hyphen
coca-cola
fanta
and so on. They have dangerous gases, those gases cause Change the capitalization
Fanta
Correct your spelling
detrimental
detremental
effect on Correct article usage
a detremental
health
. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
unhealthy
diet is Correct article usage
an unhealthy
also
responsible to keep Linking Words
lower
level of Correct article usage
a lower
health
.
Another point to Use synonyms
considere
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consider
that
the average standard of Add a missing verb
is that
humans's
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humans'
health
would be less in Use synonyms
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next
couple Correct article usage
the next
years
means increasing pollution. Change preposition
of years
people
are using their personal vehicles for transportation and they spread more air pollution. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there are few trees available, as they cut down for construction. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
people
can not get fresh air.
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On the other hand
, many Linking Words
people
are well aware Use synonyms
about
their Change the preposition
of
health
and they are doing many things to maintain their Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, some person goes for morning walks and they Linking Words
also
do exercises. Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
youngstres
like to go Correct your spelling
youngsters
at
gyms to keep themselves fit and healthy.
In conclusion, many Change preposition
to
people
have not Use synonyms
concern
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concerned
for
their Change preposition
about
health
and they do not follow Use synonyms
healthy
diet, pollution is Add an article
a healthy
also
major Linking Words
issues
to cause Fix the agreement mistake
issue
health
problems, but some Use synonyms
people
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are worry
their healthy life and keep them fit and healthy.Change the verb form
are worried
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