The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent to do agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Being healthy is the
formost
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foremost
most
happiness and
every one
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everyone
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wants healthy life.
Although
, it is sometimes thought the healthy life would be lower in the future as compared to past. In my opinion, I considered that
people
are affected by many factors which are not good for
health
. There are several reasons why
people
's
health
is decreasing. The
first
and foremost important thing is that consuming fast food. Fast food is not good for
health
because it has too much oil.
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the UK, both women and men are working and they do not have time for cooking, they prefer junk food every day.
In addition
,
people
have
also
cold drinks
such
as
coca cola
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, sprite,
fanta
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Fanta
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and so on. They have dangerous gases, those gases cause
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detrimental
detremental
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a detremental
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effect on
health
.
Hence
,
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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diet is
also
responsible to keep
lower
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a lower
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level of
health
. Another point to
considere
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consider
that
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the average standard of
humans's
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humans'
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health
would be less in
next
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the next
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couple
years
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means increasing pollution.
people
are using their personal vehicles for transportation and they spread more air pollution.
Moreover
, there are few trees available, as they cut down for construction.
Therefore
,
people
can not get fresh air.
On the other hand
, many
people
are well aware
about
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their
health
and they are doing many things to maintain their
health
.
Firstly
, some person goes for morning walks and they
also
do exercises.
Secondly
,
youngstres
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youngsters
like to go
at
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gyms to keep themselves fit and healthy. In conclusion, many
people
have not
concern
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concerned
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for
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about
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their
health
and they do not follow
healthy
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a healthy
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diet, pollution is
also
major
issues
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issue
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to cause
health
problems, but some
people
are worry
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are worried
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their healthy life and keep them fit and healthy.
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