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Fast food is now University inmost countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend , while others do not

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There are various different prospective occur on fast
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 .there are various arguments on the topic of liking fast
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 in our country.In
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 topic because In today's world the demand for fast
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 is now increased for the
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 50 decades.
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 is because of the fact that fast
food
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 is available very easily , less cost occurred , convenient and time-consuming nowadays. Most of the
children
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's are like fast
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 example fried chicken, hamburgers, noodles , Pizza and Chinese
food
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 like momos . Renold McDonald's are the best example as we were seen where
people
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 want to go with their
children
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 and enjoy their birthday parties.
Children
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 are happier in their places and
people
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 will enjoy the quality of time with their families. But
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, Regular eating fast
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 has many disadvantages. The
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 foremost disadvantage is that it should create problems with
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 health.
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 don't know about the
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 is hygiene or not . Most of the
people
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, as well as their
children
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,
children
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 are used to eating unhealthy
foods
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 in university or campus canteen.
People
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 should have to try to eat homemade
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instead
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 of fast
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 .
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 is because not to save time but
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 for their
children
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 better future and better health. In overall phases we concluded that most
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 focus on fast
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 in university is becoming increasingly popular just because of some
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 think that
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 is a positive trend nowadays
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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