Some people think that schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability. Others believe that young people with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some

people

believe that schools should accept students based on their academic ability, while others argue that children should

study

together no matter what they have

different

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level

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of

abilities

. I agree that the latter viewpoint

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more advantages than the former one. In

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essay,

both

of

these viewpoint

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will be discussed before reaching a conclusion. On the

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hand, encouraging smart students to

study

together will strengthen their

abilities

.

Moreover

, as all

pupils

have

similar

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knowledge

level

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, teachers can teach

advance

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subjects for

pupils

.

For example

, Triudomsuksa school, a leading high school in Thailand, is well-known in terms of getting into

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universities.

This

school is competitive, but all students perform well in academic

both

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and international

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.

That is

the result of all

pupils

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hard.

Therefore

, I think if schools aim at enhancing only academic

abilities

, selecting

pupils

based on their academic knowledge is the best suit for schools.

On the other hand

, it is undeniable that there are different

abilities

among young

people

and they should learn together. One of the positive

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is that they will understand the

real world

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situation that

people

are different. They should learn to live

other

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people

who may not

as

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smart as them.

For instance

, some children are not good at

academic

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academics

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, but they are good at art, sport, dancing, etc. When they educate together, they can learn from each other. On top of that, it is vital to develop their skills

both

academic and

creativity

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. In my point of view, I strongly believe that young

people

will get more benefit from knowing and learning from different types of

student

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. In conclusion,

both

of these viewpoints have their pros and cons.

Nevertheless

, it depends on societies and parents to choose which side is the best option for children. In my opinion, as I believe in diversity, I support the latter view that different

abilities

should

study

together.