What Is Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

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We all have listened to and learned about global warming since our childhood. And we all are encouraged to mitigate

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trouble, but

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problem has become an obstacle for all humans in

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modern time. There are many effects of it on the earth and various types of solutions, which can be imposed to finish

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issue. I will discuss all the negative effects of

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obstacle and will suggest some ways to handle

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matter.

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with, global warming has happened due to industrialization, which leads to harmful emissions.

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, in

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modern age, there are multifarious factories, which spread various kinds of harmful gasses,

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as carbon dioxide, methane, and we call them greenhouse gasses. These pollutants are detrimental to our land and become a cause of global warming.

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, It has been shown in the 'International magazine' that greenhouse gasses made some hole in the ozone layer, which protects us from detrimental sun lights

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why our land climate has changed than the previous time.

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, our natural resource water can be finished in the future as well as we are getting some dangerous diseases due to detrimental sun lights. To mitigate

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problem, we can take some serious steps in

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age. But

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can be possible if governments impose some laws regarding

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concern.

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, bureaucracy should impose a tax on the industries, which emit pollution and suggest some way to alter the way of working so that we could save our mother earth.

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, fossil fuel should be prohibited in all countries. In the USA, the government had imposed rules regarding fossil fuel issues and

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country is using pollution-free energies to fulfil its needs, as well as all the nations, should influence by

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nation. In conclusion, our natural habitat is polluting day by day. so, Authorities should consider seriously

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issue and make some laws to decrease the climate temperature of our earth.

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, humans should stop spreading pollution by vehicles and use pollution-free ways to live in

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world.

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What Is Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

Your opinion

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