there are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?

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Nowadays,
mobile
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phone has become an indispensable part of human lives.
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, there are problems associated with
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in social, medical and technical fields. In spite of these issues, I would argue that the benefits of
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phone
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outweight
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outweigh
the drawbacks which will be discussed in
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in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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with, mobiles have created few problems in
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life.
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of cells
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made human kinds unsocial to
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an extent that a communication gap has been created between family, friends and society.
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, adolescents are busy
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playing games
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their
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rather
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socializing.
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, it has been found out that the wireless frequency created by a cell, lead to health hazards like deafening or brain cancer.
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,
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in digital phones has brought our privacy at stake because at any time it can be hacked and our personal details can
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. Despite the aforesaid drawbacks of
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the smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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, the benefits
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cannot be ignored.
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played
a vital role in education during the time of pandemic due to Covid-19.
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, the
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institutions
were closed due to lockdown but students who didn't have computers at home still continued their studies with the help of
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, mobiles have chatting app installed in them which has enabled short communication free of cost as compared to
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. To conclude, bearing in mind the above information and deliberating all facts, it can be deduced that
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it is true that handphone has caused some problems for human beings, they have assisted us in many ways . It is the irresponsible act of
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mobs themselves that has caused the issue.
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