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Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

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Living a healthy lifestyle is essential for the physical and mental well-being of every individual. Over the
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past few years society
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 become less vigorous and Inactive as compared
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to the bygone days. There are a few reasons
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 as technological advancement and unhealthy meal intake on a daily basis by the folk associated with
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 phenomenon. The only viable
solutions
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 to overcome
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the situation would be
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masses
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regarding
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 the importance of regular physical training and
consumption
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 of nutritious
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. The most preponderant reason behind the unhealthy lifestyle of
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 is the latest inventions in the technological sector.
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, most of the work is done by automated machinery, or robots in the manufacturing units, and
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 mainly indulged in those jobs that are less physically demanding which as a consequence
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people
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 lazy and unfit.
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, the older generation performed all the chores manually and it required them to use all parts of their
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. Even though during
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 leisure hours,
people
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 remain busy with their electronic gadgets, watch movies on Netflix, and play video games. Not participating in any recreational activity, making them obese and welcoming to cardiovascular diseases in their
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.
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, consumption of fast
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 meals is another factor responsible for worsening the health condition of the
people
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. As the diet is high in calories and
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 very low nutritional value, it not only have detrimental effects on the human
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 but
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 make it lethargic in the long run. An effective approach to eradicate
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 problem could be to draw public attention towards the benefits of exercising and having
nutrient rich
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food
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, many dietitians, nowadays, give more significance to exercising and
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 diet responsible for making the immune and neurological system of
human
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body
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 strong and powerful. To spread
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 awareness, governments can initiate campaigns to encourage
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 for enrolling in gymnasiums and
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 fresh
food
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 from supermarkets. If
people
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 will do workouts in sports centres regularly, it will definitely improve their mental and physical health. Another immediate solution could be cooking meals at home, according to the requirements of one's own
body
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, enriched with vitamins and nutrients that will assist him in achieving fitness goals and for remaining energetic and free from diseases. In conclusion, undoubtedly the latest technical development and excessive usage of electronic devices along with the wrong
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 choices are the sole criterion for increasing laziness and reduced fitness levels amongst
people
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. Persuading them to show participation in
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 training and opting for healthy diet plans could be
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 step to curb
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 problem in society
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