Some people feel that children should be educated in single sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The type of

school

plays a pivotal role in moulding the career / character of children. A few individuals believe that

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sex

school

is ideal for any given child, while others opine that co-educational

schools

have an upper hand over

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. I concur with the

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in

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composition. It is observed that students from

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sex

school

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are often shy and

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compared to others, particularly while interacting with members of the opposite

sex

.

This

is mainly because of their limited exposure and communication with the other

sex

at their juvenile age.

As a result

, adolescents often find it very challenging to adapt to the corporate environment where both men and women work.

This

makes them feel awkward at the workplace.

Moreover

, they might

also

feel left out and isolated in their workplace, which in turn affects their performance and job satisfaction.

On the other hand

, students studying in co-educational

schools

are often bustling with

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and are usually

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in nature.

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is because of the

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arena in which they are nurtured during their academics.

Additionally

, co-educational institutes are equipped with additional soft skill courses like moral science, which aids in inculcating basic civic ethics like gender equality and respect for

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sex

.

Such

skill sets are highly appreciated especially in hospitality industries like hotels and aviation and

thus

they widen their scope and job opportunities. A contemplated survey published by a renowned newspaper shows that a co-educated student had 20% higher chances of getting campus placement than a student who studied in

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sex

school

. In conclusion, co-educational

schools

equip students with all the social and interpersonal skills they need for success in their personal and professional life.

Hence

, in my opinion, it is better to send children to

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schools

.