Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eat meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
get hold of the idea that
meat
should be
substituded
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substituted
by
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for
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vegetables
in everyone's
diet
, as it can cause health issues. I,
however
, believe we should consume a
ballanced
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balanced
diet
which includes both
meat
and
vegetables
to provide all
essencial
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essential
nutrients for our body.
Also
,
veggy
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veggie
food may not be suitable for those who suffer
indigestion
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.
Meat
contains fundamental proteins which are
nessesary
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necessary
for muscular growth while vegetable
dishesh
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dishes
cannot provide them.
For instance
, Branched Amino Acids which are needed for muscle
developement
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development
are only present in
meat
dishesh
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dishes
, and insufficient intake of them by
vegeterians
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vegetarians
may result in muscular weakness.
On the other hand
,
vegetables
are a good source of
fiber
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which is
also
nessesary
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necessary
for health
maintanance
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maintenance
.
This
shows the importance of keeping a
ballanced
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balanced
diet
including both materials. Another issue with
recommendation
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the recommendation
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of
vegetable
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a vegetable
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diet
to all individuals is that it can cause serious digestive problems in them, making it
untolerable
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intolerable
.
For example
,
people
who suffer from chronic inflammatory bowel diseases may experience bloating and abdominal pain after eating a plate of
vegetables
.
As a result
, it is not a good choice for these
people
to use food that contains only
this
item. To conclude, recommending a
vegeterian
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vegetarian
vegetarian's
diet
to all
the
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people
is not right as it is deficient in some nutrients and cannot be tolerated by some of them.
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