Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that the local
culture
of a country is influenced by watching international
media
,
such
as films, TV and magazines. In
this
,essay we will discuss
both
the advantages and disadvantages of
this
topic. On the one hand , watching international movies ot TV shows helps
people
to understand different
cultures
other than their own. They can come to know that how the world outside works. Having
such
knowledge can help
people
understand each other much better.
This
will help create a strong
relation
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between the 2 nations and they can help each other grow.
This
exposure to the international
media
will help increase the globalization effect and can lead to better trade relations.
For example
, after watching harry potter many
people
from India wants to buy their mercenaries. Due to
this
trade relations between 2 nation sees a high level of growth. which ultimately improves
economy
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the economy
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of
both
the nation. One more example of
this
can be, reactly new Spiderman movie(an American movie) was one of the highest-grossing
movie
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movies
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of all time in India. In
such
,situation
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both
India and American cinema have an economical boost. Some movies and TV shows
also
include
people
from different
cultures
to show unity and they
also
embrace other
cultures
.
On the other hand
, local
people
get more and more involved with international
media
and forget about their root
culture
. Sometimes to promote their
culture
it shows the other
culture
in a bad light. Which can influence many
people
in the wrong way. In conclusion ,
although
there
is
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are
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some negative impacts with
explosion
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the explosion
an explosion
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of the international
media
,
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pros outweigh its cons.
This
explosion
to
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in
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international
media
can be good for
both
cultures
.
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