Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is believed that the local
culture
of a country is influenced by watching international media
, such
as films, TV and magazines. In this
,essay we will discuss both
the advantages and disadvantages of this
topic. On the one hand , watching international movies ot TV shows helps people
to understand different cultures
other than their own. They can come to know that how the world outside works. Having such
knowledge can help people
understand each other much better. This
will help create a strong relation
between the 2 nations and they can help each other grow. Replace the word
relationship
This
exposure to the international media
will help increase the globalization effect and can lead to better trade relations. For example
, after watching harry potter many people
from India wants to buy their mercenaries. Due to this
trade relations between 2 nation sees a high level of growth. which ultimately improves economy
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the economy
both
the nation. One more example of this
can be, reactly new Spiderman movie(an American movie) was one of the highest-grossing movie
of all time in India. In Fix the agreement mistake
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both
India and American cinema have an economical boost. Some movies and TV shows also
include people
from different cultures
to show unity and they also
embrace other cultures
. On the other hand
, local people
get more and more involved with international media
and forget about their root culture
. Sometimes to promote their culture
it shows the other culture
in a bad light. Which can influence many people
in the wrong way. In conclusion , although
there is
some negative impacts with Change the verb form
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pros outweigh its cons. Correct your spelling
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media
can be good for both
cultures
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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