Computers are being used more and more in education, discuss the advantages and disvantages and give your opinion.
Schools have integrated technology into their classes more intensively.
This
essay will explain the benefits and drawbacks of applying computers
in schools by looking at first
how it can assist pupils to study and then
discuss how it makes students
lazier, while the writer’s opinion will be given at the end of the essay.
Computers
greatly help students
to widen their insights. It enables access to many sources of knowledge since people around the world can share their ideas freely and easily. Students
can study practically by watching Youtube videos posted by strangers. For example
, I personally study English by utilizing my computer for going online watching Youtube where I am able to observe well how the natives are speaking, and this
led to a significant improvement.
On the other hand
, some individuals believe that the use of computers
in education is likely to lead students
to have less motivation for learning. Giving huge access to information encourages them to take a given lesson by the teacher for granted as they do not try to think of the answers by themselves, but rely on Google’s answers. Moreover
, the provided game on the computer highly distracts them to follow the class because they deem it more attractive. For instance
, the reported research by BBC in 2020 revealed that 55% of students
in Jakarta prefer to use their computers
for playing games rather than digging for new insight.
To conclude, even though the negative impact lies on the use of computers
for students
, causing them to be inactive from following the class. I highly believe that it can be reduced by a supportive teacher, being able to direct them to take advantage of obtaining new insight with ease.Submitted by andri.saputraozz on
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