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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this?

#study #university #students #tution #fees #people #education
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 educational institution pupils ought to pay expensive tuition expenses but a few admission cannot afford the pay due to some reasons so some people will have thought that university schooling should be free. I disagree with the above statement.
Education
 plays a vital role in human life. Free
education
 to everyone will cause a tremendous change in financial strain on a nation. If free
education
 is implemented
then
 all the universities depend upon the state fund which is not good for the general public
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 government will increase the tax and GST. These days nothing is free according to my knowledge because just for
education
also
 the colleges should rent or lease a building. For ,students they have to provide basic amenities like restrooms, benches and blackboards where all cannot be afforded by the government alone. If we provide free
education
 without tuition fees it is ever hard for the universities to provide the facilities in the colleges like hostels with healthy food , rooms with neat and clean bathrooms and laundry rooms. The library is
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 most important place for a university informative books are expensive and very rare to be found to allocate all the books for students universities need to charge the fees. the academy should
also
 give salaries to lectures which
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 taken from the fees that are paid by the admission. To conclude, providing free schooling is not a good idea because the educational institution cannot fulfil the basic amenities. But
then
 colleges can reduce the tuition pay which can be affordable for all the people and can complete their
education
 on time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equal opportunity
  • higher education
  • educated and skilled workforce
  • student loans
  • graduate
  • debt burden
  • incentivize
  • pursue
  • educational attainment
  • knowledge-based economy
  • social mobility
  • low-income students
  • socioeconomic status
  • economic growth
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • skilled labor
  • overcrowded classrooms
  • quality of education
  • public funding
  • higher taxes
  • reallocation of resources
  • essential services
  • mixed model
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