In many countries, it is common for people to consume fast food. However, some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is a most debatable issue that
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food
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become a trend to eat in people’s daily
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in some nations. While some crowd think that
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has very much impact on our way of living and nutrient. I disagree with the statement because
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fast meal is not good for our health and it becomes expensive ultimately.
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, It is true that most
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people are eating
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meals nowadays because they have no time to make healthy
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in everyday
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. They have no option except to eat fast cuisine even though they want to eat a healthy diet.
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food
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is mouth-watering foodstuff so people attract to eat once they taste and slowly it becomes a habit for daily
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. So,
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, people are being trapped in chronic diseases like diabetes or obesity. One in every three-person become sick from
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disease.
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, many students who live far from their family, have no option except ready to eat a meal so, from a very small age, They have started to eat fast cuisine.
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, they become sickly with time. The detrimental effect of fast
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can destroy a person’s
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. Over time, because of fast
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habit, a person becomes a house of disease and
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every penny go for hospital expense. In conclusion, I must say that there is fast
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very common in the world but its effect on a person can be detrimental day by day in later
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. So we should avoid fast meals as much as we can.
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