You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration. In the letter: • mention what course you would like to attend • give details about your educational background and work experience • say why you choose this college
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sara Ahmadi , and I studied agriculture engineering
from
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Industrial
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there is a Add a comma
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which is related to my job ,and I really want to attend Correct your spelling
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this
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these
classes
.
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Moreover
, I want to presume that about four years ago ,I got my master degree in biotechnology engineering and my proposal was about different genomes in citrus plants . Since then
,I have been working in an institute which
is working on various plants like rice ,cucumber and etc.
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Unfortunatelly
, my experience in the field of Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
genetic
is not enough and I am want to increase it ,because I would need it for my job progression , so I decided to attend Replace the word
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your classes .
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apply
Finally
, I am looking forward to riceiving
your answer, and if there is Correct your spelling
receiving
any
application that I should submit please tell me .
Yours Faithfully,
Sara AhmadiCorrect your spelling
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