You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration. In the letter: • mention what course you would like to attend • give details about your educational background and work experience • say why you choose this college

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sara Ahmadi , and I studied agriculture engineering

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Industrial

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University of Isfahan . I noticed ,

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your

website

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there is a

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which is related to my job ,and I really want to attend

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classes

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. The name of the subject is botanical genetics and the start of it

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is on

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15th .

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, I want to presume that about four years ago ,I got my master degree in biotechnology engineering and my proposal was about different genomes in citrus plants . Since

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,I have been working in an institute

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is working on various plants like rice ,cucumber and etc.

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, my experience in the field of

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is not enough and I am want to increase it ,because I would need it for my job progression , so I decided to attend

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your classes .

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, I am looking forward to

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your answer, and if there is

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application that I should submit please tell me . Yours Faithfully, Sara Ahmadi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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