Some believe that stress level 0f people deal with in today’s society has an impact on rising road accidents, But others deny that it has any connection on that it has any connection on that. What is your opinion?

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amount

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of accidents

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increased notably. The majority argues that the anxiety of

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is caused to the risen whereas others oppose

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idea. There are many other factors

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that improvement

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my point of view. Analyzing of lack of rules and regulations as well as the negligence of passengers will prove

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idea.

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, the less impact of laws on careless driving

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mainly caused to remarkably higher up the hazards.

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, it is widely known that

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the penalties for drunken drivers, misuse of

road

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signs and even fatal incidents on

roads

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are considerably less

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the policy of the country.

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, they drive without caring and

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met

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with

road

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tragedies and

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escape from the low who can easily escape by punishments.

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it

become

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apparent that

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fewer

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legal acts cause

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the growth of

road

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crashes.

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, the

inattentions

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inattention

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of

travelers

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travellers

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on

roads

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are created many disasters whereas high populated cities.

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, the urban areas become

crowed

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for

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with

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seasonal shopping whose attention

totally

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on their buying things.

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Similarly

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pavement sellers

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keep their goods near to

roads

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by covering the

road

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area whereas people gather around them to bargain and buy things which they sell. As a

results

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of

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, oversight to be created unfortunate tragedies on vehicle

path

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. To summarize, the insufficient laws of unsafe drivers and senseless society are the major reasons for the inclination of misfortune on the

roads

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.

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it is clear that the stress level of

community

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the community

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is not accelerate

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is not accelerating

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the misfortune of

roads

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