You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the air pollution caused by three different levels
such
as electricity generation, transport, and industry in four nations in the
2021 year.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, China showed the highest entity by atmosphere infection, while
Australia experienced the least significant small-particles
. Correct your spelling
small particles
However
, the ppm
standard in commerce had some fluctuation across the various countries.
China had the higher ppm
entity in wind infection, with a rate of around 59 ppm
in electricity rising to above 70 ppm
in public transportation, and reaching 80% in
industrial purposes. Change preposition
for
In contrast
, Australia had the lowest ppm
in smogginess, at almost 19ppm
in electric current. Correct your spelling
19 ppm
However
, the ppm
entity remained steady at approximately 18 units in shipment and business.
The breeze deterioration amount in America, with 30 ppm
in electricity usage rising to just under 58% in transit, while
trade performed almost 40%. Hence
in Japan, the deterioration rate in
three causes was about 15 Change preposition
for
ppm
, 30 ppm
, and 42 ppm
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ppm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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