children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial prospective. what are the causes of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce this pressure.

These days
children
face
pressure
for various life expects
such
as educational success, social activities and financial situation. In my opinion,
this
condition occurs because of more competition between other
children
and family expectations. In
this
essay, I will explain what is
this
pressure
and what should people do to reduce
this
.
To begin
with, there are some pressures on to
children
for being perfect.
Firstly
, competition is very critical
pressure
to them. All of them want to have successful academic careers, financial and social situations.
For example
, most of them start to study lessons at an early age and when they enter the exams, they want to take
first
place and
that is
why they feel that
pressure
. ,
Also
another problem is they face family expectation
pressure
. A lot of families prefer to their
children
should be perfect.
For instance
, They
pressure
their
children
for an academic career
such
as taking exam points. If I will continue with how can we solve these problems and reduce
this
pressure
, I think that the
first
solution is we should change the family mentality. Most of them do too much
pressure
on their
children
for an academic career because they want their well being but the family should decrease
pressure
on them. One immediate practical solution is to do fewer exams.
For example
, If
children
get in fewer exams they can forget the competition and
that is
why their
pressure
will reduce in time. In conclusion, most
children
have a lot of
pressure
and they face too many problems these days ,
however
, I strongly believe that if the family decrease their expectations, we can solve
this
problem easily.
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