children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial prospective. what are the causes of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce this pressure.
These days
children
face pressure
for various life expects such
as educational success, social activities and financial situation. In my opinion, this
condition occurs because of more competition between other children
and family expectations. In this
essay, I will explain what is this
pressure
and what should people do to reduce this
.
To begin
with, there are some pressures on to children
for being perfect. Firstly
, competition is very critical pressure
to them. All of them want to have successful academic careers, financial and social situations. For example
, most of them start to study lessons at an early age and when they enter the exams, they want to take first
place and that is
why they feel that pressure
. ,Also
another problem is they face family expectation pressure
. A lot of families prefer to their children
should be perfect. For instance
, They pressure
their children
for an academic career such
as taking exam points.
If I will continue with how can we solve these problems and reduce this
pressure
, I think that the first
solution is we should change the family mentality. Most of them do too much pressure
on their children
for an academic career because they want their well being but the family should decrease pressure
on them. One immediate practical solution is to do fewer exams. For example
, If children
get in fewer exams they can forget the competition and that is
why their pressure
will reduce in time.
In conclusion, most children
have a lot of pressure
and they face too many problems these days ,however
, I strongly believe that if the family decrease their expectations, we can solve this
problem easily.Submitted by gokaygoksu9898 on
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