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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #education #income
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university
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 is a place where “pebbles are polished, diamonds are dimmed” itself signifies the importance of
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education
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. Some segments of society reckon that there should not be any fees for students who want to study in colleges.
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 there are arguments on both sides, I agree with
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 statement. Even these beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs. To embark on, there is no doubt for some people who support to have some nominal charges for
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, because they believe that a lot of funds need to be accumulated to make a
university
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. If there is a tuition fee, students may maintain standards and ensure the quality of the teaching.
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, free
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 cannot be appreciated by society and,
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, it may chance to become worthless.
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, one recent study conducted by the USA confirmed that there is a shortage of low-income jobs like plumbing and carpentry in many countries due to free
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.
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, expensive
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 might help to full fill these types of jobs. Why
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education
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 should be free? The underlying reason behind
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 is that it will encourage more public to attend school and
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 will be beneficial for society.
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, it will lead to developing the country. It does not only help to increase literacy but
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 there is a chance to decrease the crime rate.
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 that, communities that are not financially stable can
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 join
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 and achieve their dream job. To
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 corroborate the above view, due to free
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 in many countries, the rate of illiterate mass is decreasing. The more they study, the better life is. In conclusion, there are several benefits to free
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, I would say that authorities should keep a normal charge for
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.
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 why I opine that while problems are decreasing due to free
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, people may take it in the wrong way.
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