People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is a harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions?
Nowadays peoples
are so much socialize
and always busy with their carrier.Change the verb form
are so much socialized
are so much socializing
As a
result
connecting to the Add a comma
,result
neighbours
are so much difficult for the lackings of time.This
essay intends to analyse this
situation and also
follow some solutions to aveliate
Correct your spelling
evaluate
ameliorate
validate
this
problem
.
To begin
with, The first
and foremost reasons
Fix the agreement mistake
reason
of
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for
this
problem
is that the modern world keeping
busy Wrong verb form
keeps
people
on
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at
the
work.That's why sometimes Correct article usage
apply
community
doesn't know who lived Correct article usage
the community
the
Correct article usage
apply
next
door
. Although
its
happen much in Correct pronoun usage
it
city
rather than Add an article
the city
a city
village
.City Add an article
a village
the village
people
leads
a robotic life for livelihood.Change the verb form
lead
Thats
why Correct your spelling
That's
That
its
really tough for them to cooperate with the Replace the word
it's
it is
next
door
.For that,suddenly if people
faces
any Change the verb form
face
problem
they could not easily go the neighbours
. For instance
, A
ill old Correct article usage
apply
people
who
maximum times lived alone in the home and their family members are busy for work.Though suddenly the old Change the pronoun
whom
people
feels
illness Change the verb form
feel
then
its
tough to him go the Replace the word
it's
it is
neighbours
if they did not know them.Clearly
the elder Add a comma
,Clearly
people
falls
a very big Change the verb form
fall
problem
.
Moving the next
, Rarely interact
with the Wrong verb form
interacting
neighbours
is another cause is that today's people
are so much introvert
and they do not easily contact with the Replace the word
introverted
community
.Though its
not good for the Replace the word
it's
it is
community
but
sometimes they feel good Remove the conjunction
apply
for
that because the other Change preposition
about
community
may be
not interested to cope Correct your spelling
maybe
up
with them.But needs to keep a good relationship with the Change preposition
apply
next
door
.It helps anytime and anything for.For example
with
Change preposition
apply
the
good relationship helps Correct article usage
a
people
with the community
people
easily.sometimes community
wants to help the poor Correct article usage
the community
people
together and then
well relation also
helps them to provide Add an article
a donation
donation
for helpless Fix the agreement mistake
donations
people
.
To sum up, all the people
needs
to keep the Change the verb form
need
well
relation and only the Change the adverb
good
two
Add a hyphen
two-door
door
can solve this
problem
. To lead a good social life all community
needs to interact the each another
Correct quantifier usage
other
people
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