People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is a harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions?

Nowadays peoples
are so much socialize
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and always busy with their carrier.
As a
result
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,result
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connecting to the
neighbours
are so much difficult for the lackings of time.
This
essay intends to analyse
this
situation and
also
follow some solutions to
aveliate
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evaluate
ameliorate
validate
this
problem
.
To begin
with, The
first
and foremost
reasons
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reason
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of
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for
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this
problem
is that the modern world
keeping
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keeps
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busy
people
on
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at
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the
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work.That's why sometimes
community
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the community
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doesn't know who lived
the
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next
door
.
Although
its
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it
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happen much in
city
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the city
a city
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rather than
village
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a village
the village
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.City
people
leads
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a robotic life for livelihood.
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why
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really tough for them to cooperate with the
next
door
.For that,suddenly if
people
faces
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any
problem
they could not easily go the
neighbours
.
For instance
,
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apply
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ill old
people
who
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maximum times lived alone in the home and their family members are busy for work.Though suddenly the old
people
feels
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illness
then
its
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tough to him go the
neighbours
if they did not know them.
Clearly
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the elder
people
falls
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a very big
problem
. Moving the
next
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interact
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interacting
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with the
neighbours
is another cause is that today's
people
are so much
introvert
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introverted
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and they do not easily contact with the
community
.Though
its
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it is
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not good for the
community
but
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sometimes they feel good
for
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about
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that because the other
community
may be
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maybe
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not interested to cope
up
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apply
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with them.But needs to keep a good relationship with the
next
door
.It helps anytime and anything for.
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with
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the
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good relationship helps
people
with the
community
people
easily.sometimes
community
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the community
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wants to help the poor
people
together and
then
well relation
also
helps them to provide
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a donation
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donation
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donations
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for helpless
people
. To sum up, all the
people
needs
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to keep the
well
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good
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relation and only the
two
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two-door
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door
can solve
this
problem
. To lead a good social life all
community
needs to interact the each
another
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other
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people
.
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