People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is a harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions?

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and always busy with their carrier.

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connecting to the

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a robotic life for livelihood.

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they could not easily go the

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if they did not know them.

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with the

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is another cause is that today's

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and they do not easily contact with the

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not good for the

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wants to help the poor

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helps them to provide

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for helpless

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People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is a harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions?

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people's quality of life in the developing countries. Howevever, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

In many countries, the consumption of fast food is becoming more and more popular. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend for individuals and for society as a whole.