Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded.” Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern ,era people prefer reading books online rather than going to the library. Some people believe that
libraries
are not necessary for the future and should be stopped for public funding. I completely disagree with it, in my view
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,view
atheneum
are not just meant for books we have several advantages over the internet
like surrounding which atheneum
provide, health concern etc.
Firstly
, as we know that there are lots of electronics devices in the market which gives us an option to read book online but for students who are in college or school they cannot study peacefully at their home or hostel and their libraries
comes
as the best option because there we get peaceful environment and we can Change the verb form
come
also
seat for a long time
.For example
, during my college ,days i
prefer to study in Change the capitalization
I
libraries
rather than studying in the hostel because of the silent surrounding and we can also
get all the important books which are required during the exams. So, atheneum
are
important for all the students who want to get more knowledge and improve their studying skill.
Change the verb form
is
Secondly
, reading book in libraries
do provide us an
environment to stay away from the screen while on the Add the preposition
with an
internet
we have to spend lots of time
on the screen which can affect our eyes but the community are so addicted to the internet
now they are forgetting the use of libraries
.Most of the atheneum
are publically funded but now they are having difficulty in raising fund for it because of internet
addiction and they think that instead
of donating money for libraries
they can utilize the same facility at home but they are not understanding the health complications here.For example
, new generation crowd who are busy with their works and they don't have the time
they mostly rely on the internet
for everything but using devices for a long time
they will have several implications on their eyes and i
feel the government should come up with a plan to save the archive for future so that everyone should know the advantage of it and reduce the damages.
In the conclusion, Change the capitalization
I
libraries
should be funded either by the government or the public and try to do some kind of book fair on a regular basis so that people can understand the pros of it and they should stop depending on the internet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite