Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded.” Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern ,era people prefer reading books online rather than going to the library. Some people believe that
libraries
are not necessary for the future and should be stopped for public funding. I completely disagree with it, in my
view
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atheneum
are not just meant for books we have several advantages over the
internet
like surrounding which
atheneum
provide, health concern etc.
Firstly
, as we know that there are lots of electronics devices in the market which gives us an option to read book online but for students who are in college or school they cannot study peacefully at their home or hostel and their
libraries
comes
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as the best option because there we get peaceful environment and we can
also
seat for a long
time
.
For example
, during my college ,days
i
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prefer to study in
libraries
rather than studying in the hostel because of the silent surrounding and we can
also
get all the important books which are required during the exams. So,
atheneum
are
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important for all the students who want to get more knowledge and improve their studying skill.
Secondly
, reading book in
libraries
do provide us
an
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environment to stay away from the screen while on the
internet
we have to spend lots of
time
on the screen which can affect our eyes but the community are so addicted to the
internet
now they are forgetting the use of
libraries
.Most of the
atheneum
are publically funded but now they are having difficulty in raising fund for it because of
internet
addiction and they think that
instead
of donating money for
libraries
they can utilize the same facility at home but they are not understanding the health complications here.
For example
, new generation crowd who are busy with their works and they don't have the
time
they mostly rely on the
internet
for everything but using devices for a long
time
they will have several implications on their eyes and
i
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feel the government should come up with a plan to save the archive for future so that everyone should know the advantage of it and reduce the damages. In the conclusion,
libraries
should be funded either by the government or the public and try to do some kind of book fair on a regular basis so that people can understand the pros of it and they should stop depending on the
internet
.
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