Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss
It is largely argued that the most effective way to punish offenders is by putting them in
prison
. A prison
is an appropriate form of punishment
for people
who have harmed other people
physically and mentally. Sometimes, prison
cannot be a form of punishment
in terms of making friends with other offenders and having luxuries.
On the one hand, prison
is an effective way of diminishing criminals
in society. If the crime is more serious, prison
is the most common punishment
and also
, some criminals
may pose a threat to society. Therefore
, they should be put in prison
to ensure the safety of other citizens. Prison
is a necessary evil for more extreme measures. What is more, for the majority of crimes, prison
is the best answer for those who have committed crimes such
as murder and violence should carry the death penalty.
On the other hand
, prison
can not be an effective tool for criminals
to become better people
. Because taking away people
's freedom can be the worst thing we can do to a man. Furthermore
, prisons let inmates have luxuries such
as video games, TVs and top chefs to cook their own food. In my opinion, prison
is not a holiday camp and it should be a means of punishment
. And so, Inmates make friends with other offenders like themselves. Prison
is a particularly good way to rehabilitate some people
, as it just educates them in the ways of criminals
.
To sum up, prison
can be a good solution for criminals
but, in our current society prisons are not an appropriate form of punishment
. I personally think that prison
is not the best remedy for criminals
.Submitted by uluga2002 on
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