Some people think that environmentall problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Certain people claim that
environmentall
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environmental
issues
shoyld
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should
be solved globally, whereas
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others
contend it needs to be handled individually by nations themselves. In my opinion, on
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problem must work all nations together as a team
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it would never be solved. There might be several reasons why people hold the view that environmental issues should be solved on a global level.
Firstly
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,
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will help solve the problems faster and globally, if nations will work in a team.
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,
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politicians
will be able to set global limits on waste produced by factories around the world.
Secondly
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, countries will be able to
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organize
a state
environmetall
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environmental
program as a Greenpeace. Despite the argument
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mentioned
above,
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environmental
problems can
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solved
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on a national scale.
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is
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because
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there
are some issues which
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not have any influence on some countries.
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Maldives
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the Maldives
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threatened
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by global warming. According to reports from NASA, almost 80% of the islands could become uninhabitable by 2050. While Europe is not yet threatened by global warming. And Europe will just waste time and money by solving
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problem now.
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, from
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point of view, for countries will be better focus on they own
environmentall
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environmental
problems. In
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conclusion
, I would argue that both scales are important and have their pros and cons. But I claim that
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problem must be issued on a global level since
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is a common issue.
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, together we will come to a more rational and correct solution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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