Some people think it is one of the best ways to solve environmental problems by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental

pollution

has been a major concern in recent years. The main reason

of

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air

pollution

is caused by the combustion of fossil fuel, some people think that government should raise the

price

of fuel to resolve

this

issue. In my opinion, it may help to some extent;

however

,

this

is not the only way to tackle

this

issue. On the one hand, increasing the

price

of

petrol

can help to reduce

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environmental

pollution

to some degree. The excessive use of cars releases carbon dioxide into

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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which is detrimental to

earth

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. If the

price

of

petrol

hiked, individuals would probably start to drive less often and

this

in turn

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can decelerate the rate of air

pollution

.

However

, the increase in the cost of

petrol

would not stop

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environmental

pollution

.

Besides

, the fuel

price

determined the market

price

of essential commodities, and increasing

price

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can affect

poor

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the poor

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and middle class.

On the other hand

,

government

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the government

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can take

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to mitigate these problems. A better solution is to invest in renewable energy

such

as solar, wind and tide rather than unrenewable energy like

petrol

and coal.

For example

, solar power in the United States has proven its efficiency in energy production.

Second

, by improving public transport and reducing the cost of

traveling

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, the government can

ecourage

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encourage

people to take

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transportation;

this

practice can help clean the environment and reduce traffic. To conclude, I strongly believe that the hike in the

petrol

price

is not the best solution to

this

problem. Improving the efficiency in public

transportaiton

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transportation

and investing in renewable resources is better alternatives that ought to be considered.