These days, many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

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not to cook, they can do another activity like rest or socialized with their

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on the way, to make it simple they did lunch and dinner

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aspect like more simple for the workers.

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, the main drawback that eaters face is

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meals nutrition. Less nutrition could lead to

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because they could have some disease for their

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eaters could face unhealthy life if they keep eating outside. In conclusion,

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in current days. While it brings

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These days, many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels.

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?