These days, many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowdays
, Correct the word
Nowadays
eat
in Wrong verb form
eating
the
restaurant is more popular than Correct article usage
a
in
Change preposition
at
home
because of people activity
that Fix the agreement mistake
activities
demand
most of their Change the verb form
demands
time
outside of living
Correct pronoun usage
their living
place
. This
essay will demonstrate how consume
eatery cuisine Wrong verb form
consuming
have
Change the verb form
has
Correct your spelling
positive
postive
aspect but will Correct article usage
a postive
also
show it could lead to affect community nutrition. In my opinion, citizens are better having
lunch or dinner at Change preposition
off having
home
despite the problem they faced.
On the one hand, Nowadays, people spend most of their time
on
working Change preposition
in
place
and eating outside home
have some Correct article usage
the home
benefit
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benefits
such
as simplicity. Cooking by self sometime
take Replace the word
sometimes
many
Replace the quantifier
much
time
because it need
some preparation. If they Change the verb form
needs
are choose
not to cook, they can do another activity like rest or socialized with their Change the verb form
choose
relative
. Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
For example
, my parent spend about 8 to 10 hour
at Fix the agreement mistake
hours
work
Correct your spelling
workplace
place
, and around 2 hour
on the way, to make it simple they did lunch and dinner Change to a plural noun
hours
on
the restaurant before Change preposition
in
went
Wrong verb form
going
home
. Thus
, consume
Wrong verb form
consuming
food
outside of living place
have positif
aspect like more simple for the workers.
Correct your spelling
positive
On the other hand
, the main drawback that eaters face is unhealthy
life. Add an article
an unhealthy
Food
seller
, sometimes only tend to use affordable Fix the agreement mistake
sellers
food
materials to make the product cheap without consider
meals nutrition. Less nutrition could lead to Change the verb form
considering
unhealty
life and it is very bad for every Correct your spelling
unhealthy
workers
because they could have some disease for their Change to a singular noun
worker
habbit
. Correct your spelling
habit
For instance
, many
small-medium Replace the quantifier
much
food
seller
in Jakarta Change to a plural noun
sellers
using
unfresh Wrong verb form
use
food
ingredients to make the price cheaper. That's why,
eaters could face unhealthy life if they keep eating outside.
In conclusion, Remove the comma
apply
cosuming
Correct your spelling
consuming
food
in shops become trend
in current days. While it brings Add an article
a trend
the trend
the
negative impact, Correct article usage
a
but
it Correct word choice
apply
also
saves quality time
for family
.Correct article usage
the family
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