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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all student can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I disagree that all
students
 can be afforded
tuition
 fees. There are two reasons for supporting my opinion.
Firstly
, there would be a
tuition
 fees problem. Some people surely want to study and research seriously in the university.
However
, in my opinion, other
students
 want to spend their time as admission. They only want to have been
students
 because they don'
t
 want to work. I thought
such
 people shouldn'
t
 have been qualified for college recruitment. It is wasting the
tuition
 fees since they wouldn'
t
 contribute to our society. I thought it isn'
t
 productive and wasteful to give the money to
such
 people.
Secondly
, if there aren'
t
 some tuitions, the facilities of the university would be damaged and aren'
t
 be able to be kept clean. Some enlistments are
also
 attracted by the cleanness of the facilities. If it lacked, their motivation would decrease. To keep their appearances, it is important to receive the
tuition
. In conclusion, there are some problems that happen a difference between higher and lower-income certainly because of the expensiveness of tuitions.
However
, there are other incidents as mentioned above. So I think that it is wasteful that all
students
 are given the qualification to be free. It should be adopted by
students
 who want to learn surely.
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