In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many people predict that mode of the transportations is likely to operate without the driver and only the commuters will be inside the moving vehicle. I am of the view that there are more drawbacks rather than any of its benefits. Technological advancements are amazingly making their way for a better future.

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, driverless cars, buses, and trucks are advantageous in the sense that there is no need to hire skilled drivers, a man can easily move from one place to another.

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, reckless and rude drivers will no longer be a problem if

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prediction happens.

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, in my perspective, riding in a driverless car is absurd. Accidents happen anytime in any part of the road with drivers in control, what more to a vehicle with a computerized control system?

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, the uncontrollable incident that happened to the automatic Mitsubishi Montero a few years back, it was proven that the computerized system caused

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cases. Reports of accidents came from different points of the region that caused casualties to many. Ultimately, there is a need for human control in

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operation for safety and security rather than the electronic-based system. For most people, especially men with families, one of their major sources of income is being an operator of shuttles, jeepneys, and trucks. Many undergraduate gentlemen may have lost the in-demand jobs on the road which is driving, and they do not know any other skills except for

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, if they will be eliminated in the future, many families will be hungry. In conclusion, there are legitimate reasons to believe that there are benefits in using a driverless mode of transportation.

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there are much more disadvantages to people in many aspects.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experience

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

The process diagram details the steps how chocolate is produced

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph • Explain why you need that particular photograph • Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it