Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however,think that other types of progress are equality important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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notion and I put my own viewpoint

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of, each of the countries has many fields for improving

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all of the sections leashed to financial processes.It is the rule of life If you have a lot of money you may buy everything. For ,example good study which goes to specialized courses and good health which nurture specialist

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members of the government

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not willow the knowledge so that country faces persistent sorrow.government divide too much money for study,textbook,good experts,impose grands for grow up knowledge in the foreign countries,afterwords will produce the best teenagers with the which right controlled public. ,

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the ministry must add to investment according to improving what kind of section it is depending on economic processes.For ,example hospitals and

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because the life of humans hands of

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raise financial parts because people come to

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they pay a lot of money. In conclusion in my opinion cradle to improving country including the

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of economic and financial charts.It is the obligation of leaderships