Nowadays it is possibe to use computers and moblie phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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contemporary world, the number of communication has increased significantly and there is a large variety of languages.

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have an important role these days. Nowadays we have

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on all smartphones. Many people might believe that there is no need for a human who translates and others may have a different opinion. I stand with the first idea and I will discuss my reasons.

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, It should be mentioned that tourists are becoming more popular around the world because of our transportation system and there is a significant need to find a human translator but if they use their phone

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of renting a person they can have conversations with native people.

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, when a tourist comes to Iran they may be able to find someone for translation .

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, they can use

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automatic and there is no need to pay someone else.

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, another application of

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novel technology is that students can study abroad easily.

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, when a student wants to study in Italy, they may have difficulty in their daily routine because of their language.

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, some parts of society think that these applications that can translate need more development and they are not accurate enough. In fact, there are some words in each language which have different meanings and it depends on the sentence.

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application can not be used unless developers find a way to fix the codes for correct translation.

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, when the governments of each country have a meeting,

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bug may affect their words meaning so it can affect their decision. To summarize,

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automatic

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can be useful the may get the human role in future,

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need to be more accurate for some special uses.

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, I agree that auto-

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have gotten the human role in translation.

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Nowadays it is possibe to use computers and moblie phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people say that universities should only accept the young students with the highest marks. However, others think that universities should accept people of all ages that may not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Companies should provide sorts and social facilities for local communities.

Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take