It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
Volunteering has always been considered a virtue
to
individuals and society. Change preposition
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Although
there is an argument that Linking Words
this
should be compulsory for all young Linking Words
people
, in my opinion, Use synonyms
this
compulsion would bring more harm Linking Words
instead
of advantages.
There are two main benefits of compelling young Linking Words
people
to do unpaid Use synonyms
work
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the basic needs of indigents Linking Words
such
as food and housework may be fulfilled. Many Linking Words
people
who are in need cannot afford the food materials and starve, there is Use synonyms
also
a population who are unable to do housework because of disability or ageing. Linking Words
Secondly
, helping others could boost the virtues of responsibility and compassion. There is a chance that seeing these Linking Words
people
results in more understanding and broadening youth's horizons that the world is full of Use synonyms
the
population in an Correct article usage
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unfavorable
situation. They may Change the spelling
unfavourable
do
not know how bad the situation can be and just live for themselves if they do not see and feel these Unnecessary verb
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people
in person.
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On the other hand
, I believe Linking Words
this
coercion would have more downsides. One of these would be a lack of motivation. If youngsters have a say Linking Words
to help
others as a volunteer, more numbers of them will become one. Change preposition
in helping
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group may not prefer to obey and do something compulsory but in the case of free will, they are happy to help. Another disadvantage could be the busy job schedule. Linking Words
Youth
need to Fix the agreement mistake
Youths
work
full-time to have a prosperous future and be able to raise a family, Use synonyms
therefore
, they are likely to not have enough time for unpaid Linking Words
work
and if they are forced to doUse synonyms
, they
will face health problems Rephrase
so, they
such
as chronic fatigue. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
compulsion may give a sense of belittlement to the Linking Words
people
in the community. No one accepts help from others if they are not willing to do that.
In conclusion, compelling youngsters to do unpaid Use synonyms
work
in the community would have more potential Use synonyms
harms
than possible benefits. In my view, encouraging them to do volunteering would be more efficient.Fix the agreement mistake
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Provide more specific examples of the potential harms of compelling young people to do unpaid work
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