Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?
These days, urban youth are less participated in farming
work
. There are several reasons for this
situation, and I believe young people
should be encouraged to engage in farming work
.
There are two main reasons why young people
in rural areas
tend to leave farming. Firstly
, youth unemployment in rural areas
is high. This
is because it is more difficult for young people
to find an opportunity job in the countryside than in the city. Therefore
, when youth can't find viable jobs in their communities, they have to migrate from the suburb in search of opportunities in bigger cities or different countries. For example
, almost students in rural areas
in Viet Nam like Thai Binh always want to have a successful future; hence
, they will choose more developed cities like Ha Noi, a capital city of Viet Nam to study university or find a job. Secondly
, they tend to hold a negative opinion about agriculture
work
. Farming is a job that requires a lot of energy and is really time-consuming. Moreover
, farming is often linked with hardship. Therefore
, young people
will become lazy and believe that profit from farming is can not cover their living costs.
From my point of view, young people
should be encouraged to join in farming work
. The first
reason is agriculture
matters to the future of development of the country. Almost countries over the world have to count on agriculture
to develop their economy. This
is because only farmworkers can produce nutritious food for a booming population, citizens, especially the poor; hence
without agriculture
, the country can not have enough food for people
, and can not develop the country. Another reason is that with modern technology and energetic teenager can make a machine that helps farmers to solved farming problems. For instance
, people
can create a helicopter to spray medicine to the wheat for killing pesticides.
In conclusion, fewer young people
do farming work
in rural areas
due to bigger opportunities in cities, and I believe that it is crucial to encourage people
to do more farming work
for developing countries.Submitted by phuongank1511 on
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