A close friend stayed at your house for a few days and forgot to take his watch when he left. Write a letter to this friend and: Inform him that he has forgotten his watch Explain why you can’t post it. Ask if he can pick it up.

Dear Teja, How are you doing? Hope everything is fine with you. I am doing great. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that you have forgotten your valuable thing here.

Firstly

, you forgot to take your watch when u left my place. I actually thought to send it by post but unfortunately, post services are suspended temporarily here due to climatic conditions. I don't when the situation comes to normal.

Therefore

, I request you if you can come and pick it up.

Moreover

, it will be a chance for both of us to spend time again. We can have a party and chill, talk for hours together, cook our favourite food, drink, sit and watch movies and play. Hopefully, Swathi is

also

planning to come over here to meet me

this

weekend. It would be my pleasure if I have you both.

Finally

, I expect a response from you confirming your visit. Warm wishes, Vijaya Madamanchi.

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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