A close friend stayed at your house for a few days and forgot to take his watch when he left. Write a letter to this friend and: Inform him that he has forgotten his watch Explain why you can’t post it. Ask if he can pick it up.

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Dear Teja, How are you doing? Hope everything is fine with you. I am doing great. I am writing

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letter to let you know that you have forgotten your valuable thing here.

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, you forgot to take your watch when u left my place. I actually thought to send it by post but unfortunately, post services are suspended temporarily here due to climatic conditions. I don't when the situation comes to normal.

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, I request you if you can come and pick it up.

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, it will be a chance for both of us to spend time again. We can have a party and chill, talk for hours together, cook our favourite food, drink, sit and watch movies and play. Hopefully, Swathi is

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planning to come over here to meet me

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weekend. It would be my pleasure if I have you both.

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, I expect a response from you confirming your visit. Warm wishes, Vijaya Madamanchi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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