Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Mr Ravinder, I am writing

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letter regarding the enrollment in the computer course that you are starting. Do you still have space for one student? I know that having basic knowledge is a requirement for your class.

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, I want to make it clear that I had no computer-related course in my elementary school mainly due to work overload. But

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does not mean that I am not interested in learning about computers. In fact, I always wished to have one

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course. Could you make an exception for me?I would be grateful if you give me an opportunity to do

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subject. I can assure you that you will not regret giving me a chance as I will put all my efforts to do it.

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, I am a fast learner and I grasp things quickly. In spite of

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, if you are doubtful about my performance, I can show you my academic grades. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Aman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

167 words

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