Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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It is a debatable issue that parental skills should be taught in school. Some segments of society believe that a course about becoming good parents must be offered in school how to perform like an ideal parent. I completely disagree with it and I would like to discuss some reasons in

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, school is for getting academic and business knowledge to become successful in professional life. It is true, learning of

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child caring

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necessory

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necessary

but it will not help us to get a job, managing

finacial

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financial

things and so forth.

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, a student is studying computer subjects,

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he/she should learn online earning skills during the study as an extra skill, It will help him/her to manage financial profit or loss

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paramount

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the paramount

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thing at

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time.

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of studying

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caring

stretegies

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strategies

which are not required at

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stage.

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, my personal point of view is adolescents should be learnt from their

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families

. They should observe their parents

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instead

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of studying parental management books.

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, there are two persons,

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one is a reader who reads books about

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apply

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parenting management and

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who judges the

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practical

things on daily basis.Both reader and observer cannot same

child

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caring responsibility.

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would perform better as compared to

reader

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the reader

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. why? because he/she had practical observing to manage

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child

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the child

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. In conclusion, schools courses should only be about

academical

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study rather than to parental skills

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learning

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because

student

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the student

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can stable himself at

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stage and

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practicle

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practical

practice

experience is better

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then

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than

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theoratical

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theoretical

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, I would like to suggest students should study professional subjects in schools. They will automatically learn when they will become parents.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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