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In some cultures,children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvages of giving children this message?

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 because it is part of life and The whole crowds doing hard
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 achieve a good
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 of life that way tutor,cultures and parents told that they can do anything but try too hard duty .I agree that thay way is more advantages like children increasing confidence
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 but some disadvantages are
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 teenagers often say that they can achieve anything if they try hard
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.it's most important to all individuals and more advantages of giving children
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 making future because they started the process about
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 and they try to more take good results
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 of 65%
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nation
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 achieve goals because they
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 aims and cultures played a good role in it.As a
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 for teenagers because they do not need many options for the
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 but sometimes did not achieve and they do not try to do other
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 because they are
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 time doing hard
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 about achieving anything.
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 cricket but they are not successful about it and they do more hard
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 but after not ,
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 they are not trying to do other
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 and sports because they already try to .Results that way losing success
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 in the country because crowds do not try to different things they more prefer to
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 side. In my conclusion,people should be making other plans about anything because some you not complete achieves but you try to other skils.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • motivation
  • self-esteem
  • confidence
  • perseverance
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • anxiety
  • resilience
  • mental health
  • external factors
  • socio-economic conditions
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