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There is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

#communication #members
In recent years, the
Internet
 is an invention that arouse a wave of public opinion on account of its strengths and limitations. Some
people
 think it is an instrument that can connect
people
 and go up solidarity but other supposed that it’s neither has detrimental nor get in the way of communicating among
people
. From my perspective, I subscribe to the notion that the
Internet
 made
people
 and communities more isolated due to the following reasons.
Firstly
, the abuse of teenagers on the
Internet
 nowadays is a deteriorative issue that needs taking notice more. After working time, most
people
 utilize the
Internet
 throughout the day regardless of different activities, it’s not an issue until they depend excessively on it.
As a result
, they are chatting
instead
 of face to face, calling
instead
 of meeting, that’s point gradually causes distance among
people
 and seriously made aftermath on mental health.
For instance
, the rate of
people
 who has introverted is virtually augmenting several years up to now, they are frequently under pressure and cannot strike the balance of emotion. That point indicates the major hazard to whom use the
internet
 as well as technologies improperly.
On the other hand
, it can’t be denied that the invention of the
internet
 brings vast benefits to humans. Apart from being detrimental, it helps
people
 keep in touch together and look for information but users need to take stock of it.
Likewise
, it
also
 has numerous social media to post or interact with friends, distant relatives help
people
 more close-knit and
Internet
 has lots of electronic commerce software for consumers to purchase belongings .
Consequently
, utilizing the
Internet
 properly can help us get the majority of benefits. On the whole,
Internet
 has two sides, it’s
also
 a beyond compare instrument if users use it properly. But
on the contrary
, the
Internet
 is addictive to whom abuse it excessively and made them have more distance from society.
Accordingly
, the way of using plays a vital part can impact directly on
people
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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