You live in a room in college you share with another student. However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work with. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. Describe the situation Explain your problems and why is it not working Say what kind of accommodation you would like

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I hope I find you well.I am a student at Northlea College.I am writing you

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letter because of my accommodation arrangement. I am sharing the room with another student.She is in an upper grade than me .We have been sharing for two months now,since the day we stayed together I have been having problems.The

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incident happened on the

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day,she had a party in the room and invited lots of people without my concern as her roommate.My Laptop and my few belongings were stolen .I tried to confide in her she did not seem to care .Another problem is that she comes late every night and disturbs my sleep I am unable to sleep peaceful or study in the room.I believe

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environment is bad for me . May you please consider my complaints and I am hoping to hear from you soon. Yours Nonhlanhla

Tue Apr 05 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

147 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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