You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

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It is the editors' choice that select what to announce
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the media or even what to write
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local newspapers.
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is due to the fact that their firms are owned
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the people who are in power who hire
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editors
percisly
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precisely
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authorities claim that
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always
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current events, they intentionally reveal the bad
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so much that citizens became accustomed to them in my opinion.
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why it is crucial to report more good
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to decrease public anxiety.
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, the main factor that affects
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broadcasting
decisions is that most
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the
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news
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-related companies are owned
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decision makers
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.
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prince
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of Qatar owns
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Aljazeera
, which
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events in the locality and internationally as well. Even though
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truth
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is substantial to any nation,
news
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editior
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editor
editors
tend to draw the public attention
some where
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else by not revealing the
truth
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publicly in order not to expose, challenge and question those in power. Another factor worth considering
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those
editiors
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editors
are paid to the max to hide the
truth
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.
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, because bad
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are
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being broadcasted around the clock, citizens got accustomed to listening to them.
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, newspapers and media always talk about wars, natural disasters, and crimes so much that
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became natural to individuals.
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why it is worth mentioning that a
truth
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-seeking organization that can tackle hot
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fearlessly, is essential to national
interset
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interest
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. If we managed to do so, public anxiety would decrease.
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, individuals could focus more on their work.
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, better outcomes could be expected
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national
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economy, which would increase
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the standard
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of living for many. In conclusion,
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and media are being controlled by
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editiors
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editors
because they are well-paid and they work
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companies that are owned by those who are in power that hide the
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in order to escape away
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their misdeeds. For
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this
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reasons, bad
news
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spreaded
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spread
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and people got used to them. it is
therefore
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recommended that good
news
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should be published more often to decrease anxiety in society.
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