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Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#think #politicians #times
In
this
present day
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 society , since almost every citizen has taken much interest in
Politics
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 , the issue of whether politicians should always tell the truth or not has ignited the public attention ,and
consequently
,
this
 has sparked much debate .
Therefore
, the arguments on both sides of
this
 controversial issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs, and
finally
 , my opinion will be given . On the one hand , some opponents who are patriotic opine that being honest can give many advantages not only for
country’s
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 development but
also
 for individuals’ advancement .
Firstly
 , they have the privilege to know about
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country’s
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 up to date news and the latest ongoing information. By knowing so , they can have an upper hand and make proactive actions.
For instance
 , if citizens knew that their country will be invaded , they could prepare for necessary actions in advance.
Accordingly
 , they expect
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honesty and transparency from political leaders.
However
 ,
on the other hand
 , as politics is deep and profound ,other proponents have asserted that states members have the right to keep
secret
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 confidential and privacy concerns .
In addition
 , politicians are
risk takers
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 and have to swap their decision depending on circumstances .
Likewise
 , it is impossible to give the right information all the time .
Furthermore
 ,
although
 a country’s economic situation can be sincerely shared with everyone , political matters could not be publicized truly. Having both sides of
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 considered , in spite of the fact that political issues are risky to be outspoken straightforward , I firmly believe that being frank with individuals could enhance overall achievement .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integrity
  • transparency
  • ethical dilemma
  • diplomatic tact
  • misinformation
  • public trust
  • social fabric
  • national security
  • pragmatic politics
  • democratic principles
  • accountability
  • role models
  • grey area
  • public perception
  • preventive secrecy
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