It is often thought that the increase in juveniles crime can be attributed to violence to the society. Do you agree that this is the main cause of the crime? What solution can you offer to deal with this situation.

According to some
people
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the increase in the rate of crimes committed by teenagers is due to exposure showcased in
Tv
shows and
movies
. While I agree with the view that
brutality
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depicted in media can contribute to
this
problem, there are several measures that can be taken to deal with juvenile
crime
.
To begin
, I think the reason some
minors
commit
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a crime
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crime
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is that they are heavily influenced by the violence shown in films or
Tv
series and do not understand the consequences.
In other words
, they believe that
this
behavior
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makes them
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superior to their counterparts,
however
, they do not understand the legality of committing
such
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an offense
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offense
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offence
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.
For instance
, my son’s
neighbor
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who was involved in a heated argument with his friend brought out a small knife from his pocket and injured his friend when ask why he said it was an act of
defense
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defence
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that he watched it in a movie a month ago.
Hence
watching
violent
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a violent
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film
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films
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on
tv
would make
minors
to be violent .
Furthermore
, there are effective solutions to address the growing problems of child
crime
.
Firstly
,
movies
that are been shown on
tv
or
media
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in media
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should be censored.
By
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this
government should help reduce the
amount
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of
violence
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movies
that television, radio, and internet shows.
In
addition
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parents should
also
help to block channels that show these
movies
by using
parental
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guidance code that comes with every decoder at home .
For example
, a survey carried out by
the
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American psychologist in 2001 revealed that most channels that showed
this
ferocity
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of movies
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was
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were
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censored by the American censor committee. Evidently,
this
will help curb the
movies
that are been watched by
minors
.
Secondly
, it is essential for parents to monitor their
children
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activities by knowing the kind of pursuit children indulge in and
also
give them constant support and guidance. In conclusion,
by
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restricting
minors
to the type of
movies
they watch and
neccessry
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necessary
support from their parents can reduce the incidence of juvenile
crime
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • juvenile crime
  • desensitize
  • social and economic factors
  • peer pressure
  • parental neglect
  • predisposition
  • psychological issues
  • mental health support
  • educational programs
  • community programs
  • mentorship
  • sense of purpose
  • media exposure
  • non-violent conflict resolution
  • positive activities
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