It is often thought that the increase in juveniles crime can be attributed to violence to the society. Do you agree that this is the main cause of the crime? What solution can you offer to deal with this situation.

According to some

people

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the increase in the rate of crimes committed by teenagers is due to exposure showcased in

Tv

shows and

movies

. While I agree with the view that

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depicted in media can contribute to

this

problem, there are several measures that can be taken to deal with juvenile

crime

.

To begin

, I think the reason some

minors

commit

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a crime

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crime

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crimes

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is that they are heavily influenced by the violence shown in films or

Tv

series and do not understand the consequences.

In other words

, they believe that

this

behavior

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makes them

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superior to their counterparts,

however

, they do not understand the legality of committing

such

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an offense

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offense

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offence

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.

For instance

, my son’s

neighbor

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who was involved in a heated argument with his friend brought out a small knife from his pocket and injured his friend when ask why he said it was an act of

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that he watched it in a movie a month ago.

Hence

watching

violent

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a violent

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film

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films

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on

tv

would make

minors

to be violent .

Furthermore

, there are effective solutions to address the growing problems of child

crime

.

Firstly

,

movies

that are been shown on

tv

or

media

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in media

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should be censored.

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this

government should help reduce the

amount

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number

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of

violence

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movies

that television, radio, and internet shows.

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addition

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parents should

also

help to block channels that show these

movies

by using

parental

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the parental

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guidance code that comes with every decoder at home .

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, a survey carried out by

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American psychologist in 2001 revealed that most channels that showed

this

ferocity

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of movies

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was

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were

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censored by the American censor committee. Evidently,

this

will help curb the

movies

that are been watched by

minors

.

Secondly

, it is essential for parents to monitor their

children

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activities by knowing the kind of pursuit children indulge in and

also

give them constant support and guidance. In conclusion,

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restricting

minors

to the type of

movies

they watch and

neccessry

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necessary

support from their parents can reduce the incidence of juvenile

crime

.