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Some people say that the is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and your opinion.

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"What to do to enhance the
health
 level of the public?"
This
 question has been a major concern for many. While certain individuals might think that the most effective way to tackle
this
 problem is to increase the number of sports
facilities
, I generally tend to believe that more efforts should be made. Some people believe the increase in
facilities
 would surely lead to an amelioration in general
health
 standards. Principally they opine that the reason for lack of exercise is because of the unavailability of sports apparatus in their neighbourhood, though people could find a way to exercise without equipment.
Moreover
, the solution has another vital limitation as it might only be attractive to those who are fit and leading a healthy lifestyle, not those who most need it, those who are not motivated to do sport would not be motivated by the opening of a new gym, as the lack of exercise
facilities
 is mostly just one more excuse, after the opening, they'll just make up another story.
However
, there are other better measures to increase the general
health
 standards of society.
Firstly
 advertisements would be incredibly efficient to encourage people to acquire a healthy lifestyle, advertisements could be placed ubiquitously encouraging us from time to time. But seen from another point of view education has even more fruitful results, early school education regarding
this
 subject could be essential in the formation of a healthy lifestyle and habits in the future, if
this
 was done beforehand the general
health
 standard would have risen significantly. Meanwhile, a rising tax on alcohol or food with high fat, high sugar or high calories could add points to improve public
health
. To conclude just focusing on sports
facilities
 is too narrow an approach, it would be more rewarding if society focused widely on various methods,
then
 the possibility of succeeding would certainly be greater.
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