Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others think that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of society believes that

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can play an important part in the

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of

children

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to teach them innovative skills and discipline whereas

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section thinks that

co-operation

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can assist them to be a good citizen in future due to taking responsibility and controlling emotions.

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essay will discuss the reasons behind these views along with my own opinion in the conclusion.

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with, a number of

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are in favour of

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among

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because

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approach can teach them to use their imagination to

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their own moves to perform better in it.

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, they do work more with cent

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of their capacity to get good results.

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, when there is a sense of

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in

children

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, they need to follow a pattern or schedule to

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their moves and

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activity certainly helps them to be disciplined in their

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. A survey conducted by the Guardian Newspaper in March

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2015 manifestly unveiled that 65% of

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in the UK had found new innovative techniques and

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consistently on these when they were motivated towards competing

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other.

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, it is being opined by an increasing number of

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that co-

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operation

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can be conducive

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their upcoming

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as it teaches them to take the responsibility

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actions and how to

priortize

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prioritize

their actions. In fact, when

children

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are allowed to take part in team activities to learn

co-operation

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, they

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understand

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of the team and perform according to

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leader.

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, co-

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operative

skills can give a chance to control the ups and downs in the emotions of

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. If

children

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understand how to accept failure, they may become enough capable to bear the pressure of their upcoming professional

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.

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, a responsible and emotionally stable person can co-operate

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other

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in their hard times which is one of the basics of humanity. To conclude, even though some

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are inclined towards

competition

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skills, others support

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among

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to make them good adults. I believe there is a need to introduce

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co-operation

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cooperation

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to

children

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to build a better future;

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,

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healthy

competition

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can be a catalyst for

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process.