Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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species. While others consider, a

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species are

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their place.

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their lives. To illustrate, because of fire scattered in the Amazon Forest, we have lost many rare plants.

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of toxic gasses into the

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effects, which cause

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of humanity.

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of concern for the Island countries,

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atmosphere, considering that, if we

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, nature will heal itself.

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in the pandemic, when all animals are freely moving and levels of pollution

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lower. In conclusion, there are some species

lossing

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losing

their lives, but

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global warming is the

problem

we should put emphasis on.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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