Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In recent years, we have
witness
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witnessed
the
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apply
dramatical
changes on the surface of Replace the word
dramatic
earth
. A few numbers of people have Add an article
the earth
notion
thatAdd an article
the notion
a notion
,
the paramount environmental Remove the comma
apply
problem
is Correct your spelling
decreasing
decresing
numbers of particular plants and Correct article usage
the decresing
animals
species. While others consider, a Change the noun form
animal
problem
such
as global warming is
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to be
terrible
issue of our time. I believe, Add an article
the terrible
a terrible
although
,
the Remove the comma
apply
srinking
count of the flora and Correct your spelling
shrinking
drinking
funa
is Correct your spelling
fauna
important
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an important
factor
, solution of rising Add the particle
to factor
tempreture
should be the priority issue that we need to consider.
From the Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
begining
, Trees and other living beingsCorrect your spelling
beginning
,
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apply
shapes
the earth we Correct subject-verb agreement
shape
experiance
today. Throughout hundreds of years, many technological advancements Correct your spelling
experience
occured
and that explains how some Correct your spelling
occurred
number of
species are Correct quantifier usage
apply
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losing
loosing
their place. Correct your spelling
losing
Furthermore
, Increasing pollution and abrupt firs are main
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the main
cause
of Fix the agreement mistake
causes
a living beings
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living beings
a living being
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losing
loosing
their lives. To illustrate, because of fire scattered in the Amazon Forest, we have lost many rare plants.
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losing
However
, the prominant
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prominent
predominant
problem
we face is global warming. An emission
of toxic gasses into the Remove the article
Emission
enironment
is one of the many Correct your spelling
environment
resons
for the Correct your spelling
reasons
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greenhouse
green house
effects, which cause Correct your spelling
greenhouse
tempreture
rise. Correct your spelling
temperature
This
, increase in tempreture
melts the Correct your spelling
temperature
gleciers
and Correct your spelling
glaciers
also
, scientis
are predicting apprehensive facts about Correct your spelling
scientists
scientist
future
of humanity. Correct article usage
the future
For example
- the sea level is alredy
increased Correct your spelling
already
more
than one Change preposition
by more
centimeters
, and Fix the agreement mistake
centimeter
that is
cause
of concern for the Island countries, Add an article
the cause
a cause
such
as Sri Lanka and Maldives
.
If we have to consider both the topics, we Correct article usage
the Maldives
have
think Add the particle
tohave
cronologically
. Correct your spelling
chronologically
The humans
have made changes in the Correct article usage
Humans
earth
atmosphere, considering that, if we Change noun form
earth's
first
lower our effects on Correct your spelling
environment
environement
, nature will heal itself. Correct article usage
the environement
This
, we experianced
in the pandemic, when all animals are freely moving and levels of pollution Correct your spelling
experienced
was
lower.
In conclusion, there are some species Change the verb form
were
lossing
their lives, but Correct your spelling
losing
the
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