Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In modern

days

, travelling has become part of everyone's life. Especially, with the current generations travelling to luxurious

destinations

for vacation has become their dream. I'm going to detail my both side views and opinions. In our busy lives, we juggle our work, families and responsibilities. It is very important to spend time for our-self one a year.

People

choose a different method to unwind themselves, travelling is one

such

trend that the current generation has taken it seriously.

For example

, GenZ is focused on travelling to different

destinations

not just once a year but on a regular basis. Even they make short 3

days

trip

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to Thailand just for scuba or trekking.

This

clearly shows they are investing most of their finance in travelling.

On the other hand

, some are travelling just to make youtube

videos

and make money out of it.

People

become famous with the

videos

they post online on a regular basis and millions of

people

follow them.

People

travel for different reasons, mostly to experience

food

, beach, mountain, local culture and to meet

people

However

, in the early '80s. Travelling to other countries for vacations is very expensive and not everyone can afford to travel. But they do visit close by

destinations

with family & friends either by road or rail. These

days

with the help of technology and YouTubers there are millions of

videos

and documentaries available online and on television which gives an idea to make a plan on the

destinations

to visit but it will miss out on an experience that you get when you are physically there, for ,instance if you are a

food

lover and you have the interest to taste local

food

and flavours which is highly impossible through

videos

. Government these

days

promote their countries local villages,

food

& culture through advertisements

also

there make it safe for tourists to visit in various seasons. In conclusion, travelling will not just to relax and shop. But it gives a wider perspective when getting to know

people

from the other side of the world,

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it gives great memories that you store in your mind for the rest of your life, which cannot be replaced with

videos

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