Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In modern

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, travelling has become part of everyone's life. Especially, with the current generations travelling to luxurious

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for vacation has become their dream. I'm going to detail my both side views and opinions. In our busy lives, we juggle our work, families and responsibilities. It is very important to spend time for our-self one a year.

People

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choose a different method to unwind themselves, travelling is one

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trend that the current generation has taken it seriously.

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, GenZ is focused on travelling to different

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not just once a year but on a regular basis. Even they make short 3

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trip

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to Thailand just for scuba or trekking.

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clearly shows they are investing most of their finance in travelling.

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, some are travelling just to make youtube

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and make money out of it.

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become famous with the

videos

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they post online on a regular basis and millions of

people

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follow them.

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travel for different reasons, mostly to experience

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, beach, mountain, local culture and to meet

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, in the early '80s. Travelling to other countries for vacations is very expensive and not everyone can afford to travel. But they do visit close by

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with family & friends either by road or rail. These

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with the help of technology and YouTubers there are millions of

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and documentaries available online and on television which gives an idea to make a plan on the

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destinations

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to visit but it will miss out on an experience that you get when you are physically there, for ,instance if you are a

food

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lover and you have the interest to taste local

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and flavours which is highly impossible through

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. Government these

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promote their countries local villages,

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& culture through advertisements

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there make it safe for tourists to visit in various seasons. In conclusion, travelling will not just to relax and shop. But it gives a wider perspective when getting to know

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from the other side of the world,

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it gives great memories that you store in your mind for the rest of your life, which cannot be replaced with

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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