Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern
days
, travelling has become part of everyone's life. Especially, with the current generations travelling to luxurious destinations
for vacation has become their dream. I'm going to detail my both side views and opinions.
In our busy lives, we juggle our work, families and responsibilities. It is very important to spend time for our-self one a year. People
choose a different method to unwind themselves, travelling is one such
trend that the current generation has taken it seriously. For example
, GenZ is focused on travelling to different destinations
not just once a year but on a regular basis. Even they make short 3 days
trip
to Thailand just for scuba or trekking. Fix the agreement mistake
trips
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clearly shows they are investing most of their finance in travelling. On the other hand
, some are travelling just to make youtube videos
and make money out of it. People
become famous with the videos
they post online on a regular basis and millions of people
follow them. People
travel for different reasons, mostly to experience food
, beach, mountain, local culture and to meet people
.
However
, in the early '80s. Travelling to other countries for vacations is very expensive and not everyone can afford to travel. But they do visit close by destinations
with family & friends either by road or rail. These days
with the help of technology and YouTubers there are millions of videos
and documentaries available online and on television which gives an idea to make a plan on the next
destinations
to visit but it will miss out on an experience that you get when you are physically there, for ,instance if you are a food
lover and you have the interest to taste local food
and flavours which is highly impossible through videos
. Government these days
promote their countries local villages, food
& culture through advertisements also
there make it safe for tourists to visit in various seasons.
In conclusion, travelling will not just to relax and shop. But it gives a wider perspective when getting to know people
from the other side of the world, ,
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