You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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Dear Ravi, I am writing to inform you regarding a major concern which I am facing daily due to your cute pet. As you know that your pet is jumping the rail daily and playing around my garden and

also

it is eating all fruits along with leaves as well, due to

this

our kids are missing more fun and not at all playing in the garden area.

Firstly

, As you know, the fence we have is so aged and under maintenance,

hence

it is very much easy to jump by even small pets as well, which is leading to a major issue in our community.

Therefore

, I strongly decided to build a brand new 6 feet fence which will prevent all of these recurring issues. I am sure that

this

will help us to have good relations without any

further

issues. As you agreed, we are going to start building of new fence work in mid of

week. Thank you for the acceptance and I would like to ask you a favour to pay half of the cost from your end as well, which would be below 100K as per my knowledge. I look forward to hearing from you with an update on sharing of expenses. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Mon May 23 2022

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

211 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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