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You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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Dear Ravi, I am writing to inform you regarding a major concern which I am facing daily due to your cute pet. As you know that your pet is jumping the rail daily and playing around my garden and
also
 it is eating all fruits along with leaves as well, due to
this
 our kids are missing more fun and not at all playing in the garden area.
Firstly
, As you know, the fence we have is so aged and under maintenance,
hence
 it is very much easy to jump by even small pets as well, which is leading to a major issue in our community.
Therefore
, I strongly decided to build a brand new 6 feet fence which will prevent all of these recurring issues. I am sure that
this
 will help us to have good relations without any
further
 issues. As you agreed, we are going to start building of new fence work in mid of
next
 week. Thank you for the acceptance and I would like to ask you a favour to pay half of the cost from your end as well, which would be below 100K as per my knowledge. I look forward to hearing from you with an update on sharing of expenses. Best Regards, Lakshmi.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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